Monday, August 15, 2022

Writing Adults in Kit's Lit with the Questioneers: Book 3 Ada Twist, Scientist

Ada Twist, Scientist Ada Twist, Scientist by Andrea Beaty
My rating: 5 of 5 stars








ADA TWIST SCIENTIST

BY: ANDREA BEATY

PUBLISHED: ABRAMS BOOKS FOR YOUNG READERS

YEAR: 2016

AGES: 4-8

PAGES:


In our third and final Questioneer book we have another prodigal child on a quest to be the best she can be.  She has two parents who are very present in her life and in this story.  Let’s see how they both help or hinder their very talented daughter.  Ada Twist’s story provides an example of how an adult character stepping in to slow things down isn’t always bad, and in some cases is actually necessary.    


ACT I  


P1: Title Page


P2: 

ADA MARIE!  ADA MARIE! Said not a word til the day she turned three.  She bounced in her crib and looked all around observing the world but not making a sound.  


P3

 She learned how to climb and made her big break, with a trail of chaos left in her wake.  She ran through the day chasing each sound and sight, and didn’t slow down til she conked out at night.  

  

P4 - P5

Her parents were frazzled - but tried not to freak - as Ada grew bigger and still did not speak.  Clearly, young Ada, with lots in her head, would have something to say when it ought to be said. 


P6

That’s just what happened when Ada turned three.  She tore through the house on a fact-finding spree and climbed up the clock, just as high as she could.  Her parents yelled “STOP!” (As all good parents would).


P7

Ada’s chin quivered, but she did not cry.  She took a deep breath and she simply asked, “Why?”


P8

“Why does it tick and why does it tock?”

“Why don’t we call it a granddaughter clock?”

“Why are there pointy things stuck to a rose?”

“Why are there hairs up inside of your nose?”


P9

She started with Why? And then What? How? And When?  By bedtime she came back to Why? Once again.  She drifted to sleep as her dazed parents smiled at the curious thoughts of their curious child, who wanted to know what the world was about.  They kissed her and whispered, “You’ll figure it out.”  



P10

Her parents kept up with their high-flying kid, 


P11

Whose questions and chaos both grew as she did.


P12

Act I establishes Ada’s character as a headstrong, impulsive personality driven by curiosity.  She spent three years observing the world - the first step in the scientific method.  Once she finally found her voice the first thing she did was ask questions - the second step in the scientific method.  She plays by conducting experiments and collecting data - yup, the forth and fifth steps in the scientific method.  

We see that she’s so driven by curiosity that she gives no mind to caution.  This is where her parents come in.  Both behave as the same character, jumping in to tell Ada to stop when she’s going too far  (As all good parents should).    

 

ACT II


P13

Ada was busy that first day of spring testing the sounds that


make mockingbirds sing, when a horrible stench whacked her right in the nose - a pungent aroma that crawled up her toes.  “Zowie!” Said Ada, which got her to thinking: “What is the source of that terrible stinking?”

“How does a nose know there’s something to smell?”

“And does it still stink if there’s no nose to tell?”

Sh rattled off questions and tapped on her chin.  She started at the start where she ought to begin.  A mystery!  A riddle!  A puzzle! A quest!

This was the moment that Ada loved best.  


P14

Ada did research to learn all she could of smelling and smells - both the stinky and good.  One hypothesis Ada thought could be true: The terrible stink came from Dad’s cabbage stew!

She tested and tested, but soon Ada knew . . . It was time to come up with 


Hypothesis Two.


P15

Then Zowie! The stink struck again, just like that!  Hypothesis two: “It’s caused by the cat.”

The cat couldn’t make such a stink on it’s own.  It needed perfume and some fancy cologne.  So Young Ada tested.  The test was a flop.  


P16

She started again, but her parents yelled “STOP!”


P17 - P18

“ADA MARIE!  ADA MARIE!

To the thinking chair - Now!  By the time we count THREE!”

“Enough!” Said her mother.  “That’s it!” Said her dad.

Her parents were frustrated, frazzled, and mad

“Why-?” Ada questioned.  

Her mother said, “No!”

“What-?” Ada queried

Her father said, “GO!”

“You’ve ruined our supper!  You’ve made the cat stink!  Enough with your questions!  Now sit there and THINK!”  She looked at her parents.  Her heart turned to goo.  Poor Ada Twist didn’t know what to do.  


A consistent complaint with science is that scientists often chase their curiosity without concern for the consequences.  They do because they can; and to a lot of people it seems that they never pause and consider if they should.  

The conflict in Ada’s story stems from this  sense of overwhelming curiosity.  She acts on this impulse because she can.  She isn’t considering the mess she’s making, nor the distress of her cat and family.  

As good parents should, Mom and Dad jump in.  It’s easy to see them as a hinderance or antagonists like Miss Greer was in Iggy’s story.  It is easy to sympathize with Ada because she doesn’t understand what she’s done wrong. But that’s the point.

Because of the nature of Ada’s character - impulsive and curious - her parents must be active participants in this story.  If they are not there, or if they are passive observers, then Ada becomes a whole different kind of scientist - not one you want the children to aspire toward.  

It would be out of  character for Ada to police her own actions.  The other books have not established  talking animals, or magical solutions so it would break the rules of the world if, say,  the cat turned around and told her to stop thus making her take it’s feelings into consideration.  So it falls to her parents to be her moral compass and pump the breaks.

But as we’ll see, they don’t take it to the antagonistic level of banning all science from their home.  They send her to the “thinking chair” (a detail I absolutely love). And while she’s there the whole family stops to think.  


ACT III


P19 - P20

She sat all alone, by herself in a hall.  And Ada, once more, could say nothing at all.  


P21 - P22

And so Ada sat and she sat and she sat as she thought about science and stew and the cat and how her experiments made such a big mess. 

“Does it have to be so?  Is that part of success ?  Are messes a problem?  And while she was thinking . . . What was the source of that terrible stinking?  Ada Mare did what scientists do:  She asked a small questions, then she asked two.  And each of those led her to three questions more, and some of those questions resulted in four.  As Ada got thinking, she really dug in.  She scribbled her questions and tapped on her chin.  She started at Why? And What? How? And When?  At the end of the hall she reached Why? Once again.  


P23

Her parents calmed down, and they came back to talk.  They looked at the hallway and just had to gawk.  No patch of bare paint could be seen n the wall.  The Thinking Chair now was a Great Thinking Hall.



P24

They watched their young daughter and signed as they did.  What would they do with this curious kid, who wanted to know what the world was about?  They smiled and whispered, “We’ll figure it out.”


P25 - P26

And that’s what they did - because that what you do when your kid has a passion and heat that is true.  They remade their world - now they’re all in the act of helping young Ada sort fiction from fact.  She asks lots of questions.  How could she resist?  It’s all in the heart of a young scientist.  


Now, in my world this is where genius ends for a lot of kids.  The parents would have been mad all over again.  Ada’s punishment would have been far worse and her creativity would have had to go underground for a while.  


Ada’s parents practiced what they were preaching.  They stopped and thought about the problem.  They observed her.  They studied her.  They discussed her.  And they came up with a solution to help her.   

The message here is more for the parents than the kids.   Be careful of your reactions.  You don’t want to silence your strong willed brilliant little scientist. And I love it.   



 P27-P28

And as for that smell?  What can Ada Twist do but learn all she can with her friends in grade two?  Will they discover the stick that curls toes?  Well, that is the question. And someday . . . Who knows?


P29 - Copyright



  Interesting to note that Ada does not solve the mystery of the smell here.  The solution is in the illustration.  It’s a mystery for the young readers to puzzle out themselves, which is a nice touch.  And just like in Rosie’s story the success isn’t really the point of involving youngsters in STEM - it’s the doing.  

It seems to me that Ada’s parents were the real main characters of this story.  It was up to them to figure out how to support their very curious daughter and keep her from killing the cat.  Their solution was to be more involved in her fact finding missions, encouraging her to seek information in books and to use safety equipment during her experiments - all of this is shown in the illustrations.  


MY TAKEAWAY


I loved all three of these books!  I think Rosie’s story is possibly my favorite though I relate a little better to Ada.  I was the curious messy kid growing up.  My parents just shooed me outside and gave me folksy superstitious answers to my “weird”, “wild” questions . . . It was the early nineties the internet hadn’t cropped up in people’s homes yet.  You couldn’t just look up an answer to your curious kid’s questions on your phone  and they were both blue collar workers too tired to entertain my questions about how rocks are made, or where do bugs go in winter, or why clouds aren’t the same color as the rest of the sky.


Anyway Loved this!  This series will be among my comp books for my Jasmine Small Detective series.  


I think Ada’s story is really something children can relate to.  I truly believe that children are born scientists, curious and questioning and that parents and school squash that out of them with boredom and religion.  What do you think!  Tell me in the comments!


NOTE: 

At first I thought the smell was coming from Iggy’s house because she’s outside when she smells it and you can see the sphinx from the Iggy Peck book in the background.  I thought his tower of dirty diapers might still be hanging around.  But then I took another look at the illustrations and it’s obvious.  A bit of irony for the young readers is fun.


SUPPLIMENTAL:

Examples of science odd.  Comment your thoughts below.  Suggest more for this list.  

Spider Zombie Robots


Wooly Mammoth 


Megafauna  





BEDTIME BREAKDOWN!


Unfortunately, my daughter was not interested in the any of the Questioneer books.  She’s only two so the subjects and vocabulary were a little over her head.  I’ll try them on her again in a few years, but for now we’ll just move on.


If you like these books by Andrea Beaty please consider purchasing them from your favorite local book store or renting them from the library.

I’ve been Porsche B. Yeary

I’ll see you on the next page.  

Tuesday, August 9, 2022

PBB: Writing Adults in Kid's Literature with The Questioneers: Book 2 Rosie Revere, Engineer

Rosie Revere, Engineer Rosie Revere, Engineer by Andrea Beaty
My rating: 5 of 5 stars





The second Questioneer book, Rosie Revere, Engineer.  Gives us another example of how to handle adults in children’s literature.  

Here we have an example of adults being help.  They are present just long enough to push the plot in meaningful ways - then they step back and let the child protagonist shine. 









ROSIE REVERE, ENGINEER

BY: ANDREA BEATY

PUBLISHED: ABRAMS BOOKS FOR YOUNG READERS

YEAR: 2013

AGES: 4-8

PAGES: 32


 

P1: Title Page


P2 - P3: 

This is the story of Rosie Revere, who dreamed of becoming a great engineer.  In Lila Greer’s classroom at Blue River Creek, young Rosie sat shyly, not daring to speak.


P4-P5 

But when no one saw her, she peeked in the trash for treasures to add to her engineer’s stash. 

 And late, late at night, Rosie rolled up her sleeves and built in her hideaway under the eaves.  


P6 

Alone in her attic, the moon high above, dear Rosie made gadgets and gizmos she loved.  


P7

And when she grew sleepy, she hid her machines far under the bed, where they’d never be seen.



P8 -P9

When Rosie was young, she had not been so shy.  She worked with her hair swooping over one eye and made fine inventions for uncles and aunts: a hot dog dispenser and helium pants.  



P10-P11

The uncle she loved most was Zookeeper Fred.  She made him a hat (to keep snakes off his head) from parts of a fan and some cheddar cheese spray - which everyone knows keeps pythons away.  


P12 - P13

And when it was finished, young Rosie was proud, but Fred slapped his knee and chuckled out loud.  He laughed till he wheezed and his eyes filled with tears, all to the horror of Rosie Revere, who stood there embarrassed, perplexed and dismayed.  She looked at the cheese hat and then looked away.  

“I love it,” Fred hooted.  “Oh truly I do.”  But Rosie Revere knew that could not be true.  She stuck the cheese hat on the back of her shelf and after that day kept her dreams to herself.  


Here we are giving two meaningful characteristics about Rosie.  One, she loves to build things; two, she feels the need to


hide her inventions.  We  learn that this impulse to hide her creations was caused by a miscommunication with her favorite Uncle.  

Adult as motivation or driver of conflict is something children in this age range can relate to.  How often does a young child misunderstand the reactions of adults and are left feeling shamed, or scared or misunderstood themselves?

  

This touch of relatable conflict makes Rosie’s my favorite of the three stories we’ll discuss in this series.  

(I also have a special place in my heart for Aaron Slator the Illustrator. I’ll probably find an excuse to write about him later).  

The Uncle is an example how an adult character can help move the plot along.  The story continues with an example of how another adult character can help the young protagonist  without taking over the story.  


ACT II



P14-P15

And that’s how it went until one autumn day.  Her oldest relation showed up for a stay.  Her great-great-aunt Rose was a true dynamo who’d worked building airplanes a long time ago.  She told Rosie tales of the things she had done and goals she had checked off her list one by one.  


She gave a sad smile as she looked to the sky: “the only thrill left on my list is to fly!  But time never lingers as long as it seems.  I’ll chalk that one up to an old lady’s dreams.”  


Like Mrs Greer, Great Aunt Rose has a backstory - an unacquainted dream this time.  It isn’t as ridiculous as Greer’s story, but it also happens to center on the MC’s interests as an engineer.  This sets up Great-great-Aunt Rose as a mentor character because she shares the same interests as, and similar background with Rose.  

Having a mentor character also sets Rosie up to have someone worth impressing again.  That means she's not just inspired  make something.  She's inspired to make something with the intention of showing it off.   



P16 

That night, as Rosie lay wide-eyed in bed a daring  idea crept into her head.  Could she build a gizmo to help her aunt fly?  She looked at the cheese hat and said “No, not I.”



P17

But questions are tricky, and some hold on tight, and this one kept Rosie awake through the night.  So when dawn approached and red streaks lit the sky, young Rosie knew just how to make her aunt fly.  


P18 - P19

She worked and she worked til the day was half gone, then hauled her cheese-copter out onto the lawn to give her invention a test just to see the ridiculous flop it might turn out to be.  



P20 

Strapped into the cockpit, she flipped on the switch.  The heli-o-cheese-copter sputtered and twitched.


P21

It floated a moment and whirled around and round, then froze for a heartbeat and crashed to the ground.  



P22 - P23

Then Rosie heard laughter and turned around to see the old woman laughing and slapping her knee.  She laughed til she wheezed and her eyes filled with tears all to the horror of Rosie Revere, who thought “Oh, no!  Never! Not ever again will I try to build something to sputter or spin or build with a lever, a switch, or a gear.   And never will I be a great engineer.”  



P24 - P25

She turned around to leave, but then Great-Great-Aunt Rose grabbed hold of young Rosie and pulled her in close and hugged her and kissed her and started to cry.  

“You did it! Hooray!  It’s the perfect first try!  This great flop is over.  It’s time for the next!   

Young Rosie was baffled, embarrassed, perplexed. 

“I failed,” said dear Rosie.  “It’s just made of trash.  Didn’t you see it?  The cheese-copter crashed.”

“Yes!” Said her great aunt.  “It crashed.  That is true.  But first it did just what it needed to do.  Before it crashed, Rosie . . . . Before that . . . It flew!”  


P26 - P27

“Your brilliant first flop was a raging success!  Come on, let’s get busy and on to the next!”  She handed a notebook to Rosie Revere, who smiled at her aunt as if all became clear.  

Life might have its failures, but this was not it.  The only true failure can come if you quit.


Beautiful.  Auntie Rose is great as an assisting adult figure - ergo a mentor.  Having had the experiences of an engineer before Auntie Rose is able to teach Rosie a lesson about persistence and the importance of failure in jobs such as this.  Every failure teaches a lesson, and you will face multiple failures on the path to getting it right. 

  This is an essential lesson for creative jobs  as well as STEM jobs.  Mistakes MUST happen in order to succeed.  This important lesson comes best  from an adult who knows what Rosie was going through.    

  It’s also important that Auntie Rose is a gentle, encouraging  figure  in this moment of character building.  Now that she knows her niece's interests let’s see how she further helps the story along.  



ACT III 

 

P28 - P29

They worked till the sun sneaked away to the its bed.  Aunt Rose tied her headscarf around Rosie’s head and sent her to sleep with a smile ear-to-ear to dream the bold dreams of a great engineer.  


P30

At Blue River Creek all the kids in grade two build gizmos and gadgets and doohickeys too.


P31

With each perfect failure, they all stand and cheer, but none quiet as proudly as Rosie Revere.  


 Rosie learns that she is already a pretty great engineer. She got to hang out with her cool Great Aunt.  

As a mentor Auntie Rose didn’t take  over the project.  She didn’t tell Rosie her junk wouldn’t work.  She doesn't take Rosie to a "real" hanger with "professional" tools.  Instead Auntie Rose assisted with the project Rosie was already working on.  As a result of Auntie Rose’s encouragement, Rosie’s confidence is boosted.

Aunt Rosie’s lesson about the importance of great failures empowers her niece.  Little Rosie then goes on to empower her class.   


I’m curious about the choice to put the credits at the end.  Personally it makes more since to me but it’s unusual.  


P32: Copyright; Acknowledgments; Historical Note


END



MY TAKE AWAY


I liked this story more than the Iggy Peck one.  The character having a personal challenge to solve made me like her more.  I felt more invested in her story.  Great Aunt Rose was more likable than Mrs. Greer something to note for own writing.    


My adult brain worries that these stories will make kids feel like they should naturally know exactly what they ought to be in life by the age of two.  But let’s see what my daughter thinks



BEDTIME BREAKDOWN!


Unfortunately, my daughter was not interested in the any of the Questioneer books.  She’s only two so the subjects and vocabulary were a little over her head.  I’ll try them on her again in a few years, but for now we’ll just move on.


If you like these books by Andrea Beaty please consider purchasing them from your favorite local book story or renting them from the library.


I’ve been Porsche B. Yeary

I’ll see you on the next page.